First of all,we will going to see the the BIG BEN
who got the biggest face in the city ,after that we are going to see the Buckingham Palace where the Head of State resides, and you can frequently see the Queen’s car heading down The Mall.
and finally we are going to see the Tower London which is one of London’s oldest landmarks, started by William the Conqueror in 1066. 
.As we will be around the Tower bridge of London 
,we will going to visit the Science museum 
and have our lonch there.Before continue we could just stop at Hyde Park place 
to eat some lunch.After eating,we will go to Oxford streeet to do some shopping at Oxford street.We will need to take this underground card
with us to know where to take it and depending on the zone we will need to pay £4 or £5 .At the end of our visit,we could just go back to at Victoria Station 10minutes before 17:35 to ait for our train home.
This looks a bit rushed. I think you could write a bit more and check your writing for accuracy!
ReplyDeleteAlso, make sure that it is laid out in a way that makes it easy to read and follow. Your pictures are very big and your writing is very small!